Friday, December 20, 2013

Good Morning,
As I go through my novel for editing, I noticed I got carried away with removing adverbs. But what did I do?  I replaced them with adverbial clauses, more words.  I now have broken the rule of write less. I noted that I have a fixation as using this: "In an instant" instead of using an adverb.  The only reason I noticed this was from listening to my novel on my Kindle. So I will do a search for  "In an instant".

I downloaded Movie Maker to make a video trailer of my book.  This should be fun and challenging at best. I use pictures to help me describe things in my novel.

I am doing some research on males who dress like woman and want to be addressed as a woman. When writing about these characters, do I use the pronoun she or he?  So far, most think use the she.  I don't want to offend anyone. Brennen has one client like this named Theresa.

Here is Theresa's bed.

I researched a great amount on Russians so now my inbox is full of Russian Mail Order Brides.

I joined a few interesting writing groups. If you are a writer, you may want to check them out.

I had to delete this chapter.

This is today's GM man.

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